Every (target audience) needs (tools).

• The hook establishes an immediate connection with the reader by addressing a common need that many people share.
• The first sentence is short and to the point, making it easy to read and understand quickly.
• The hook is followed by a personal story that adds credibility and inspires readers to take action.

Every (target audience) needs (tools).

But most people aren't sure when to start.

I've taken mine from X to Z in (time frame).

Here's what I'd do if I had to start again: